Lorens4444's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Techno Rocker v2 - RdM]

Devil Dance!!!

Fantastic mix!

Bahdshah responds:

Thanks bro! appreciate it!

[Knockin'OnHeavensDoor <live>]

This music is taking my soul avay from this world.

But I dont like effects you used for vocals. It will sound alot better with usuall voice.

p.s Please PM me how you recorded and mixed your guitar. I'm begging you for it.

ChineseBoar1995 responds:

It is our regular voices. No effects was used.

[Black Jack-Ambient Music]

Very exiting and relaxing. :)

It will be better with some strings and chorus. Keep up the great work. :)

ChineseBoar1995 responds:

Okay. Thanks.

[Trance 1999 Tribute]

Very Good.

Sinple, but effective. 00:52 - 1:20 was realy what, in my opinion, trance must be like. But make an end for this song. Also it's realy short, mix it more.

Lorens 4444

Teck071 responds:

Will do.

[Overdrive REMIXeD]

Better :)

Thats much better. :)

dondrummer responds:

thanx

[Techno OH YEAH!!! (Rock Remix)]

:(...

I told you - don't use slayer that much. There are much more different sounds in FL Studio. Use pads and strings!
You are making a good drumps.
Use slayer for accompanent only. You can see votes of another users of newgrounds about this song.

dondrummer responds:

i like slayer, and i dont like the guitars that are on there so i will use slayer anyway
and besides. youve been a great help but i can use what i want

[Half dead]

AWESOME!

I realy want to know - How did you make such an avesome guitar?
Awesome song!

OPQC responds:

the guitar was edited with 3 programs. i don't tell what programs i use within' these songs. And btw, thanks for ur comment! :D

[Metal I]

Good, but...

Try to make music with another things, try not to use slayer. I wanted to do something with slayer long time before shabbash. It was pain in the teeth, I didn't finish it. :(
I'd used slayer only tvice - in my {Trance} works, on the atmosphere volume (Quiet part's volume.)

dondrummer responds:

cool, thanx 4 the tips, fl is new to me and your really helping me so thanx dude.

peace out

[When Rock Began]

???

Not bad for first try, but work harder. Try to make good volume balance. Add athmosphere (FL has good string patches and pads).
My first work on FL as an example what you can do:
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/108149

dondrummer responds:

hey again, where do u find those fx?...
i think i should of turned the guitar down a bit! lol thx 4 the review

[Piano Song]

Realy good.

I like the melody.
I used FL Keys long time ago. Add reverb to it in Mixer and change "detune" in FL Keys to 0 - this can realy improve it's sound.
But this is far avay from the realistic sound of piano. Try to use sintiser, but if you can't, try to find SF2 format of piano in Internet (you can open it with Fruity Soundfont Player).

FairSquare responds:

Thanks for the review and the advice!